Thursday, 10 October 2013


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WWW. The first two questions had very detailed answers.
WWW. We had images to help get the message out and to entertain the readers/ observers.
WWW. The writing was big and easy for people to read along to in there head.
EBI. if our last questions were as/ more detailed as the first two questions. The last questions were more important because they summarized the song if we worked harder on them we could have got better marks.
EBI. If we explained it as we were reading instead of just reading. What we had wrote. this would have helped not only the audience but us to develop our understanding.
EBI. If we included more connotations in our writing. Connotations will give the observer a clearer meaning of the song.

1 comment:

  1. How would your ebi's develop your presentation?

    AMBER

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